PBass's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sketchy Friends Dance 2]

Great concept

I'm glad you made a second one. I always love the charm you bestow on all of your animations. Looking forward to more from you.

TheBoogley responds:

with this one we had a ceremony, "I hereby bestow upon you charm"

[helper]

Nice, but needs work

The strong point in the flash is definitely the plot. You also did a pretty nice job staging your scenes, as it was pretty clear what was happening in every shot.

The weak points are most definitely the art/animation and the pacing. It's fine to draw in a style using simple shapes, but try and keep things proportional. Also, avoid reusing animation. If the character happens to do the same thing multiple times, try using different angles.

It's nice, but try and spend more time on the next piece. Make every frame a work of art! If you're not completely satisfied with a scene, it's not finished! Looking forward to more from you!

Icandraw responds:

ookk... :)

[Cruise Ship Hitchhiker]

Not too fantastic

The animation and the humor were both lacking. Perhaps you should shoot your jokes past some other people and get some feedback before animating them. This flash was really without direction. Both the art and the animation really felt lazy, I think you could have done a much better job on all accounts. Good luck on your next submission.

Rabid-Animals responds:

Thanks. Animation's not my strong point; I'm focusing on writing now.

[John Necklong]

Simple and chuckleworthy

I love senseless humor, and this animation was full of it. It was awkwardly annoying in the funniest way. The one thing I wish is that the sound of all their neckbobbing was louder and more annoying. Great job with this one!

Ham-head responds:

Thanks for the review

[Halloween Night REMIX]

Could use a lot of work.

The part I was most impressed with was the backgrounds. And at parts you seem to have a good sense of camera direction. However, the animation was what seemed to lack the most in this. Your art was ok at parts, but I think you might need to spend more time practicing on making things move fluidly. Just keep practicing and keep at it. You have good ideas, you just need to take more time fleshing them out. Each and every frame should be a piece of art on it's own! Practice practice practice! Good luck!

someplaceelse responds:

Each and every frame should be a piece of art on it's own. I like it, that's good advice, I'll try that next time.

[Brawl Funnies [Dick 2]]

Quite entertaining

It made me laugh. My name is not PButts you big silly.

CoolDrMoney responds:

it should b

[Brawl Funnies [Dick 1]]

I like it!

Your humorous portrayals of kirbopher and rina-chan were a good source of entertainment.

CoolDrMoney responds:

PButts

[Pico V.s. Darkness]

Great job!

The animation was very nice, but could be refined a bit. My biggest problem would have to be the footstep sounds lol, they're way too loud. But other than that this was fantastic.

And to the people who say the animation or "graphics" are poor, you have no idea how well this ranks compared to other animations on Newgrounds. Also, you should try animating something yourselves because appearance you haven't a clue the amount of effort that goes into the animation process.

Again, great job! Looking forward to more work from you!

Hulalaoo responds:

YES, THIS CAN ARE MORE REFINED, BUT, WELL, WITH MY ABILITY IN HE MOMENT :D, I REALLY WIN MORE OF A FRONT PAGE, I WIN EXPERIENCE FOR MY STILE, THX FOR SEE MY EFFORT

[Bellum Letale]

For eight weeks, excellent

This plays very much like a comic converted into a flash animation, with excellent artwork but very limited movement. It's very good, but if you perfected animation for a sequel, there's no telling what you could accomplish. Good luck mate!

alkr00 responds:

thank you.

[BB's Demo Reel]

Nice Job

A mix of a lot of different styles. That one FBF running animation was amazing. Good job man!

BurningBunnies responds:

Thank you kind sir.