PBass's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Days of the Week]

That's pretty much my weekly schedule

Unfortunately, mine has a Saturday on it too

Great work man, looks awesome. Good to know that the workplace hasn't sucked all of your soul out, keep 'em coming!

[Team Fortress 2 Red Pixel]

Nice

Reminds me of Swords and Sworcery a bit. Looks good.

[Kingfisher]

Great work!

I really love the water effect. You did a great job at keeping it simplistic. The only thing that bugs me is that it doesn't seem to have much motion to it. It almost feels like he just ducked his head underwater instead of divebombed into it. Those bubbles are great though.

J-qb responds:

Thanks!

[P-Bot Working]

Lot's of technical errors.

First, I'm not a big fan of crayon as a medium. But it is refreshing to see every once and a while.

The staging is rather simple and boring. It's a front view with the character in dead center. His pose is very neutral and bland.

The concept itself is simplistic. The PBot guarding 2 piles of flashes. It's another interesting representation of the portal, but in the end it's really nothing new.

Lots and lots of technical errors. Perspective isn't done very well, but the image isn't completely without depth. Unfortunately, what little perspective you have clashes. The sidewalk looks flat, while the only shadow in the image goes backwards, and the two piles of FLAs rise straight out of the ground.

Some things are unclear. That strip of buildings at the top could probably be done without, since it occupies little space and has such a rigid pattern. It looked like an abstract design to me at first.

What I can see here is effort. But I believe you can do much better. There are things I can tell that you're probably not satisfied with in this image. Always try and fix those little things that you know you can.

Such as the font, with some more time you could have made it perfect. Or with a little researching you could have discovered how to map out perspective much better. With a few pre-designs you could have improved P-Bots designs and avoided having to recolor those forearm panels.

It's a good effort, but that doesn't make a great canvas. Keep at it and keep improving.

[Bandit]

Looks good!

Might like to see a better texture in the jeans and his right arm is a little awkward, but it looks great other than that.